[中小学生英语论文]《中国学生写英语论文的常见错误总结》读书笔记

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　　标题：

　　the most common habits from more than 200 english papers written by graduate chinese engineering students

　　原文链接如下：（不能保证是原始出处）

　　时间：

　　xx以后

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　　xx.9.27

　　摘要：

　　本文提出了几种最常见的中式英语习惯它们是从超过两百份中国学生写的英文论文中观察得来的。文中解释了这些习惯并且在大部分情况下给出了从实际论文中出现的例子以及正确的用法。我们试图去解释如何去改正和避免这些错误。一些情况下我们还解释了为什么这些习惯会出现。本文可以成为一个单独的科技论文编写指南尤其是当很难寻找一个母语为英语的编辑时。

　　大意

　　section 1

　　a an the

　　冠词后面将跟随一个名词并且任何冠词与名词之间的修饰词都用来修饰这个名词(a big blue bicycle / the first award)。a和an是不定冠词the是定冠词。单数形式的不可数名词以及指代一个可数事务的普通名词它们每次都需要一些限定词（determiner）。

　　它们的使用方法如下图所示：

　　incorrect figure 2 shows the distribution of relative velocity on surface of main

　　and splitter blades.15

　　correct figure 2 shows the distribution of relative velocity on the surface of the

　　main and splitter blades.15

　　分析上面的例子surface是一个单数、可数、没有限定词的特定的单词因此要用the修饰。而blades是一个复数、可数、没有特殊限定词、并且特定的单词因此也要用the修饰。

　　very long sentence

　　太长的句子不利于读者理解应该尽量分为多个句子。对于一些参数的陈列尽量使用列表或者整齐的子句。

　　prefacing the main idea of a sentence by stating the purpose

　　location or reason first

　　在句子的前面陈述目的、位置、原因等而不是陈述句子的主要含义。这样减弱了句子的主旨混淆了读者的理解。

　　incorrect for the application in automobile interiors this paper studies the nesting

　　optimization problem in leather manufacturing. 5

　　correct this paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing

　　for application in automobile interiors.

　　tendency of placing phrases which indicate time at the beginning of

　　a sentence

　　倾向于把表示时间的短语放在句首。这样是不自然的。

　　incorrect when u is taken as the control parameter the bds for δ =0.0 0.001 0.005

　　are shown in fig. 8.

　　correct figure 8 shows the bds for δ =0.0 0.001 and 0.005 when u is taken as the

　　control parameter.

　　place the most important subject at the beginning of the sentence for

　　emphasis

　　将最重要的主题放在句首以示重视。这样的理解是错误的。

　　incorrect based on the triangulation structure built from unorganized points or a cad

　　model the extended stl format is described in this section.4

　　correct the extended stl format is described in this section based on the triangulation

　　structure built from unorganized points or a cad model.

　　“which/ that”

　　‘respectively’ and ‘respective’

　　1. respectively is misplaced in the sentence; it is put before the nouns to which it refers.

　　incorrect equations 2～6 can be respectively linearized as:……(equations given)…13

　　correct equations 2～6 can be linearized as:……(equations given)… respectively.

　　incorrect the weights of the two experts are respectively 0.600 and 0.400.19

　　correct the weights of the two experts are 0.600 and 0.400 respectively.

　　2. respectively is inserted to express that there is a certain order in which something was

　　done. however the order is already implied elsewhere in the sentence or does not need

　　to be expressed because it does not add value to meaning of the sentence.

　　incorrect if both the core technology score and core quality score of a bottleneck process

　　are respectively below certain scores then we refer to strategy 1 otherwise if

　　either is respectively above a certain score then we refer to strategy 2.

　　similarly if the core technology and core quality are respectively above a

　　certain score then we refer to strategy 3 otherwise if either is respectively

　　below a certain score then we refer to strategy 4.19

　　correct if both the core technology score and core quality score of a bottleneck process

　　are below certain scores then we refer to strategy 1 otherwise if either is

　　above a certain score then we refer to strategy 2. similarly if the core

　　technology and core quality are above a certain score then we refer to strategy

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